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“Wait, Haru! I can explain!” You called, standing up to chase after him. You ran after the onyx-haired boy, desperately trying to keep up with him. “Slow down, Haru-chan!” Saying this, you stumbled over a tree root, landing on your hands and knees.

The sharp pain in your knees echoed that in your heart. Gazing at his back recede into the distance, you felt the feelings overwhelm you and you started sobbing. The tears streaming down your cheeks seemed to only worsen the pain and misery you felt at causing Haru such grief.

“No… Haru… I…” You sobbed, barely managing to hiccup out the words. Your sentence trailed off into thin air, your words becoming mumbled jumbles of incoherent and illogical sound.

Hearing your sobs, Haru quickly turned around. “(Name)-chan…?!” He made a beeline back to where you were collapsed on the ground, surprise and worry clearly evident on his face. “Are… Are you alright…?!” He ran back to you and was almost there, when a loud shout stopped him in his tracks.

“HARU!!! Get away from her!” A loud, angry roar erupted from Rin, who had appeared out of nowhere to stand next to you. He took you by the arm, hoisting you up and forcing you to stand. “(Name)-chan… Why are you crying? Is it because of him? What did he do to you…?!” He looked down at you, anguish for you and anger at Haru clearly written across his face. When you wouldn’t answer, he shook you by your shoulders a bit. “(NAME)-CHAN!! ANSWER ME!!!”

You hiccupped, hurriedly wiping your tears away with the back of your hand. “Haru-chan… He didn’t do anything… It’s not his fault…”

“(Name)-chan… You wouldn’t cry on your own without reason to, right?! Haru!! What’d you do?!” He hugged you to his chest, squeezing you tightly.

“Rin… It… It’s alright…” You softly murmured, not wanting to make the situation worse.

“C’mon, (Name)-chan. We’re leaving.”

“W-What?! Wait a sec, Rin!! Wait a sec!” Pulled strongly by the hand, you had no choice but to meekly follow the boy. You cast a glance over your shoulder at Haru, your heart hurting when you saw the pain so evident on his face.

After walking for a while, you reached a secluded corner of the schoolyard. Rin leaned against the brick wall, still tightly holding onto your hand. “Hey… (Name)-chan… Do you really…”

“Really what…?” You murmured, your face flushing pink.

“Do you really like Haruka?”

“W-What are you talking about?! Of course I like him!”

He looked away, a hint of disappointment in his expression. “Do you like him in that way?”

“N-no… He’s… He’s just a friend…!” You blushed even more at the mere suggestion of Haru being more than just a friend to you, despite the fact that Haru had made it quite clear that that was what he wanted to be. Leaning against the wall, you sighed.

“Hey, (Name)-chan…”

“Yeah?”

“Am I allowed to be in love with you?”

“…Eh…?”

Dropping your hand, the boy moved to stand in front of you. Pinning you against the brick wall, he stared into your eyes, seemingly seeing right through you, dark, passionate red clashing with timid, slightly embarrassed (eye color).

A deep red flush reached the tips of your ears. “R-Rin?!”

He dropped his arms to his sides and reached for your hands, grabbing them tightly once more. “Would you give me a chance?”

You cocked your head, a bit overwhelmed with this sudden confession from a boy you least expected one from. “Rin… Um, I don’t know what to say…”

“That’s to be expected~ …Think about it.”

“Um… I… Uh… I will… I’ll think… about it...” You put your hands to your cheeks and looked down at the ground, staring your not-very-interesting shoes.

“Meet me at the train station next Saturday, at eleven. I’ll confirm your feelings for me.”

“Uh… Y-yeah… I’ll see you there…”

Grinning, he turned around and walked off, leaving you there alone.

You pressed your hand to your heart, feeling it go doki~doki.
Free! The Water's Melody: Haru x Reader x Rin, Part 6

I swear, they are more like 15 or 16 year olds than 12 year olds... What 12 year old knows for sure that they 100% love someone? XD I'm sorry! //shot

Regardless... RIN I LOVE YOU TOO //shot

Ugh, who to choose now... It's a competition for Reader-chan's love! Who'll win, Haru or Rin? And, is that a new competitor I foresee in the near future? Oh my gosh!!! The excitement!! It's getting hotter and hotter... I don't think I can survive another chapter like this... Somebody, save your poor author! //dies from blood loss orz

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feathery-blue-otaku Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
fasterrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Writer
faster? : o 
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feathery-blue-otaku Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
sry I didn't see the next chapter was up and it said like...

nvm XD
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MileyTu4 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 4, 2014
WAHHH
THE DRAMAAAA
honestly, I don't like drama because it's just too much for me; lol. :iconsweatdropplz:
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student Writer
D: but drama is dramatic! //shot for stating the obv
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MileyTu4 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
haha lol. XD
so you like dramatic things? :D
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
xD if they're in a story, yes ~ drama irl depends on how / who it happens to xD 
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MileyTu4 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
yeah, drama in irl really does depend on what's happening.
I remember in like 5th grade, there was this girl dating one
guy, and then they broke up or something, and then she started
dating another guy, and then she broke up with him, and then her
"ex" boyfriend wanted to date her again, and then after that her
other "ex" also wanted to date her again, and I was just like, THIS IS
TOO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! 
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mitsukunisohma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
MY LORD I WISH I HAD A LOVE LIFE LIKE THIS WHEN I WAS 13 
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Writer
OH GOD IKR jk XD i swear though, in my middle school, this is what some of the drama is like orz 
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Ria01uchiha Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Doki doki........ doki dokiii~  Llama Emoji-10 (Shy) [V1] 
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SexyBlairkitty Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Writer
Omg you're totally allowed to love me run!!! I love you too!! <3
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Writer
<3 Rin~ is~ so~ asdfgjkl;-worthy~
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SexyBlairkitty Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Writer
Omg yes
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PHSYCOTICDAYDREAMER Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Doki doki 1000% maji love
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Student Writer
LOL XD
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AmuletDragonSlayer Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
MY KOKORO WENT DOKI DOKI WITH RIN BUT WITH HARU MY KOKORO WENT BROKORO!!!! 

BROKOKOKOKOKOKKOROOOOOOOOOOOOO
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student Writer
hahaha XD your comment, my dear, just made my day X3 

uh... im glad you feel that way? (er, im not glad that your heart broke, but i'm glad that you could feel the emotions from the story? oh what am i saying... i'm confusing myself now OTL) xD
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h-e-r-0-i-n Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
oh my god this is so cute :((( but maybe you could write two separate endings? one for rin and haru? :3 please *drowns self in tears*
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Writer
XD thank you! but why are you frowning if it's so cute? ; _ ;

oooo~ XD maybe!~ that sounds like a good idea; maybe i'll do that (; no guarantees, though; sorry ^^; 
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zekka12 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
I love you rin-Kun 
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Writer
<3
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hiyadollz Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can only say this... NEED MORE! don't give up haru! how ever rin is so adorable here! :3 I love your stories!
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Writer
xD thank you so much! that really means a lot to me~ i'm glad you like them! And HARU ILY SO ITS OK :D //shot
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hiyadollz Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are very welcome! :3 I'm so rooting for haru! yush!
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Writer
haha~ you may or may not be disappointed~ ;D //shot
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hiyadollz Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha doesn't matter! :D i still will enjoy and read it while holding tissues XD
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Writer
XD yay~ as long as you like it! <3 
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BloodyxNightmair Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
The drama! The passion! I must read more!
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Writer
xDDD glad you liked it! 
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sabrina789 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you are AWSOME!sephlovesyoutooplz 
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student Writer
xD thank you! <3
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DrawtistLuva24 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
:iconsupertighthugplz: i love you even more now :iconiloveyouplz: Please put up the newest update soon (no pressure just motivation :D)
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Writer
xDDD sure about the "no pressure" part? Hahaha~ 
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DrawtistLuva24 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Yea totally sure X3 do you want to cry  from pressure?! :icondatfaceplz:
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Writer
do you want me to? muahahahahaha NO. //shot
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DrawtistLuva24 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
no...lol
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Writer
LOLOLOL //shot
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DrawtistLuva24 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
oh! right when she was laughing :XD:
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Writer
LOOOOOL Like, ooooo, right in the balls! //shot
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Creammellow Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
More! ~ Pikachus nuzzles cheeks 
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Writer
xD kk~
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Roxaslover31 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
More please~~
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Writer
ooo~ someone said please! Yay :D Thank you for saying please XD
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Budderflyy Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Writer
Oh. My. GLOB. GUUUUUUURL U ARE AT IT AGAIN! WRITING AMAZING READER INSERTS! YOU JUST MAKE MY DAY!! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~~~~~
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Writer
xD thank you so much! <3 I'm really happy you liked it~ :D :iconyuihugplz:
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Budderflyy Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Writer
No problem~ Ur just too amazing... <333333 c':
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CDee23 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HARU-CHAN!!!!! WAIT WE STILL LOVE YOU!!!!!! :cries:
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dragonmunchy Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Writer
LOL XD We love both of them~ (evenly?) <333 

HINT I KNOW WHO RC WILL END UP WITH //shot since ofc i do, i'm the author //shot again orz 
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CDee23 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Rin kinda scares me, so I think I like Haru-chan better.  Don't get me wrong, Rin is really handsome, but he just makes me nervous, and not in the good way.

XD I can't wait to find out.

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